The poems and verses that I have written over time. I do hope you enjoy them.
Superb vocabulary and moreover concise. Bhayya sorry to nitpick I think you would want to make one of the lines " door padi instead of pada .Unless its there for some rhyming purpose ;)
Made the necessary change. I intended it to be like this. However, your suggestion too makes a lot of sense. The line could have possibly structured that way.Thanks for your appreciation and your feedback. :-)
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Superb vocabulary and moreover concise. Bhayya sorry to nitpick I think you would want to make one of the lines " door padi instead of pada .
Unless its there for some rhyming purpose ;)
Made the necessary change. I intended it to be like this. However, your suggestion too makes a lot of sense. The line could have possibly structured that way.
Thanks for your appreciation and your feedback. :-)
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